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target (Free verse) by butterflymist
single handidly I write down a thought
it smellls like roses and sweet cream
is it a reality or is it a dream
it floods my soul so i know not more
bleeding in blasphamies
it chills me to the core
danger i feel could i be in love
pleasant pain toting a gun
one small move or a gentle shove........
thus i could be at an end
step carefully around my corpus
for the bullet need no send
the harsh realm is in my view
can i say yes
i could but it may be a just due
laugh at me not
i feel a bleed
for it is I whom was shot
trail my laughter at my own amiss
love has gotten me
with one fowl swoop of a kiss
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10277
Posted: March 9, 2004 1:30 PM PST; Last modified: March 9, 2004 1:30 PM PST
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