poemranker ::target by butterflymist

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Free verse № 93812

target

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Mar 2004 · 1 comment

single handidly I write down a thought it smellls like roses and sweet cream is it a reality or is it a dream it floods my soul so i know not more bleeding in blasphamies it chills me to the core danger i feel could i be in love pleasant pain toting a gun one small move or a gentle shove........ thus i could be at an end step carefully around my corpus for the bullet need no send the harsh realm is in my view can i say yes i could but it may be a just due laugh at me not i feel a bleed for it is I whom was shot trail my laughter at my own amiss love has gotten me with one fowl swoop of a kiss

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[7] deleted user 10-Mar-04/5:44 AM Reply
nice rhyme