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Goodbye Grampa "K" (Other) by mindsigns
The wind blows; I feel it in my bones And for a moment, I knew I was home One more smile could last me for a while Frozen there, the crowds came to care It's too quiet, still I hear the love One by one marching like the drum Farewell, farewell and hope that all is well Said all the town, gathering around. God Bless you, a long long time And a final kiss, I can wait for mine Heading away, leaving you to stay It's almost noon and I still love you.

Up the ladder: Step Up
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7448
Posted: March 5, 2004 2:28 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2004 2:28 AM PST
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[8] deleted user @ 24.48.207.18 | 6-Mar-04/6:08 PM | Reply
it's nice
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