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Light currents persuade weeds (Free verse) by fevriere
When our eyes meet, can he know
how we bleed, we yearn, we grow?
We wildflowers, we algae, rapturefully leaning at the moon
(ever-so-slightly dancing) fingertips
faces bright with celestiality
we, raw and wet and fruitfull
whatever touch hurts
we bruised models
whatever touch bruises
love
bite
we flutter
(soaking ever-so-slowly in the white hot ice)
leaning rapt into distant pearl eyes
he is our skin's legend,
story, song
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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11511
Posted: February 29, 2004 7:09 AM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2004 7:09 AM PST
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