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Light currents persuade weeds (Free verse) by fevriere
When our eyes meet, can he know how we bleed, we yearn, we grow? We wildflowers, we algae, rapturefully leaning at the moon (ever-so-slightly dancing) fingertips faces bright with celestiality we, raw and wet and fruitfull whatever touch hurts we bruised models whatever touch bruises love bite we flutter (soaking ever-so-slowly in the white hot ice) leaning rapt into distant pearl eyes he is our skin's legend, story, song

Up the ladder: melancholy
Down the ladder: The Love beyond Love...

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11545
Posted: February 29, 2004 7:09 AM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2004 7:09 AM PST
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