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Trusting Me (Free verse) by AskittlesK
Trusting me to save myself from my insanity trusting me to save me from the dark running to get away from this place that I thought i could be myself The Depressed me I really am. No one knows I always trusted me to only tell the truth to myself my thoughts of dying torturing my soul will never be revealed to the human eye. But see I am not the human eye I'm behind it all I'm the one who blocks my eye and turns deeper into the dark. Trusting me to look deeper and darker no light will shine so I can't see. Searching for my being who tortured my soul so they could do it once more.

Up the ladder: Cosmos
Down the ladder: The sparrow

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9987
Posted: February 28, 2004 10:20 PM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2004 10:20 PM PST
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