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The Cold (Free verse) by AskittlesK
Snowflakes fall, Air grows cold, and so does a little girl.. Drifting away from the world. Call her a freak if you wanna, she didn't care. Call her anything she didn't even put up a fight, just gave them a glare. She walked alone in her mind but outside she walked with many... None with what felt like a problem. But she didn't care. She hated the world, especially the cold... Saddness and despair she really felt... But no one knew, only her...

Up the ladder: I blink

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 9972
Posted: February 25, 2004 2:51 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2004 2:51 PM PST
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