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clementines (Lyric) by roses are read
fresh darling clementines, all the way from spain how cute is the box and your fingers picking away the peels each one drops i see your fingers laced in my body, mmmm, the way it feels mmmm, the pain i i crumble i i crumble i i crumble mmmm, the way it feels mmmm, the pain bubbling hot tub water two half-naked chicks, styling his wet hair whose house next saturday? who can i trust? like you care i've come a long way from where I was driven by your lust i'm not your kicks i i crumble i i crumble i i crumble mmmm, the way it feels mmmm, the pain

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.1764708
Weighted score: 4.2746377
Overall Rank: 13163
Posted: April 6, 2002 8:28 PM PST; Last modified: April 6, 2002 8:28 PM PST
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[8] paracetamol @ 213.123.1.78 | 18-May-02/6:30 AM | Reply
i i crumle at you poem
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 16-Aug-02/4:48 PM | Reply
i i i i i what devon? Come on the TANKARD IS EMISARRY.
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