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Damn Georgia Power (Free verse) by BrandonW
Lost in reflection; he forgot about the burning candle In his hand, and the sudden sting of melting wax served As his reminder. Lost in introspection; 'Ouch!' was only a reflex Of the mouth, for physical pain was much a part Of his forte. Fumbling with discovery; he sat wishing Georgia Power would get on the ball and fix This outage. For no brownout; can stop the flowing-- Electrical current of guilt or the visceral Ache which accompanies it. Flickety click; quick as that lights And applicances come back to life - while eyes squint, For they have not yet adjusted. And nor has he.

Up the ladder: Another Modern Myth
Down the ladder: Malaysia

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9758
Posted: February 24, 2004 11:12 AM PST; Last modified: February 26, 2004 10:09 PM PST
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[7] richa @ 81.178.228.199 | 24-Feb-04/2:13 PM | Reply
can nothing but a brownout stop this flowing?
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