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Soured (Lyric) by savagelymakeitcount Tired
and jaded
spent
you've created
at last
Ran further then
the past
is finally forgotten
Fought
bought
you sought
the price
you thought
how nice,
this
dry spot
the pain
the fear
is finally forgotten
What's left behind?
Nothing
You have?
Nothing
They're gone
Something
isn't right
Nothing
isn't right
Up the ladder:
Wounding the Sovereign
Down the ladder:
Misperceptions
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Posted: February 4, 2005 5:02 PM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2005 5:02 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9712 193 view(s)
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