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Steps (Free verse) by DarkThirteens
If raindrops were wishes, then a shower would be praise, a thunderstorm would be a plea, and a hailstorm would be a cry. If a plant were a crush, then a tree would be an ex, a garden would be a lover, and a forest would be a heartbreak. If a baby were a minute, then a child would be an hour, an adult would be a year, and a grandparent would be...Forever.

Up the ladder: soulless
Down the ladder: awakening

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8646
Posted: February 20, 2004 9:59 PM PST; Last modified: February 20, 2004 9:59 PM PST
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