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Love or Hate (Free verse) by AB_SR
Missing companionship, love and devotion Thoughts of happiness sailing freely on emotion Hard stares, bad intentions, feelings of loss Living lonely, stareing freely over a light hearted sky Day dreaming of soulful people, with smiling faces Thinking of free ghosts, flying in unbound places Picturing stars bright, lost in a dark lonely sky Seeing pictures of salvation, the truth set free in a lovers eye A kind hearted fellow, lost in a world full of sin Reaching down deep, lonely times help you look deep within Searching through pictures, dreams, a hearts untold sorrow Wishing the best, hoping for things to bring a brighter tommorow Stay standing still on a constantly moving train This world is filthy, uncleansed on a high burning flame Kindness is loved, but hate is respected Hate hides behind smiles, but some see the truth is reflected Love can be found in the palm of a child dancing bravely on clouds, soul dancing wild Young child trusting the world, with nothing but innocense Finding hate in older years, to kill and deminish this.. Will you live long in love, or march in hand with hate Will your heart flutter high, or fall low in your sought out fate Will you look through innocent eyes or contribute to sorrow Be true to those around you and I bid you good morrow.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3178744
Overall Rank: 3521
Posted: February 11, 2004 7:42 AM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2004 7:42 AM PST
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