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Love or Hate (Free verse) by AB_SR
Missing companionship, love and devotion
Thoughts of happiness sailing freely on emotion
Hard stares, bad intentions, feelings of loss
Living lonely, stareing freely over a light hearted sky
Day dreaming of soulful people, with smiling faces
Thinking of free ghosts, flying in unbound places
Picturing stars bright, lost in a dark lonely sky
Seeing pictures of salvation, the truth set free in a lovers eye
A kind hearted fellow, lost in a world full of sin
Reaching down deep, lonely times help you look deep within
Searching through pictures, dreams, a hearts untold sorrow
Wishing the best, hoping for things to bring a brighter tommorow
Stay standing still on a constantly moving train
This world is filthy, uncleansed on a high burning flame
Kindness is loved, but hate is respected
Hate hides behind smiles, but some see the truth is reflected
Love can be found in the palm of a child
dancing bravely on clouds, soul dancing wild
Young child trusting the world, with nothing but innocense
Finding hate in older years, to kill and deminish this..
Will you live long in love, or march in hand with hate
Will your heart flutter high, or fall low in your sought out fate
Will you look through innocent eyes or contribute to sorrow
Be true to those around you and I bid you good morrow.
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Weighted score: 5.3178744
Overall Rank: 3521
Posted: February 11, 2004 7:42 AM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2004 7:42 AM PST
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