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Self (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul Knowledge is the awakening of the soul
With the mind knowing comprehension is steps away
The body quenching for the taste of success
All for the purpose of realizing ones true self
All for the purpose of grasping that which is far
beyond ones reach
Up the ladder:
A Dream Awakened
Down the ladder:
The river
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Posted: August 13, 2002 11:40 AM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2002 11:40 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0476813 Overall Rank: 6830 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.178.176.95
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6-Sep-02/8:53 PM
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Things are not quenched for, they are quenched by. Here's a small nugget of wisdom you can take with you on your quest for enlightenment: Many people will incourage you by telling you your poetry is good. They are lying.
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