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Free verse № 8495

Another Window

by nightii

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Windows open to the outside world. Talking, flirting sharing your soul with strangers, ten thousand miles away. Faces unknown, voices unheard. Always there, always aware, waiting for a word, closer than loved ones, best friends, until - Another window opens...

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3 comments

[7] Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/4:59 PM Reply
On first reading this I dismissed it as the kind of sloppy, sentimental tosh that really builds up a rage in me, but then on reading it again I changed my mind. An interesting take on the world of internet chatrooms? Good final line with reference to the start of the poem. Have 7, Sir.
[7] Christof 3-Sep-02/5:23 AM Reply
I agree, this is pleasingly sardonic.
[7] tuthaliash 7-Jan-04/3:41 PM Reply
Strikes an all-too-familiar chord in me.