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Another Window (Free verse) by nightii

Windows open to the outside world. Talking, flirting sharing your soul with strangers, ten thousand miles away. Faces unknown, voices unheard. Always there, always aware, waiting for a word, closer than loved ones, best friends, until - Another window opens...

Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/4:59 PM
On first reading this I dismissed it as the kind of sloppy, sentimental tosh that really builds up a rage in me, but then on reading it again I changed my mind. An interesting take on the world of internet chatrooms? Good final line with reference to the start of the poem. Have 7, Sir.




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