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3AM At Whitey's (Free verse) by DurtKL
Location : White Castles on Reading Road. Reading, OH reading folk: white trash drunks enyce wearing wigger type drunks niggaz, drinkin 40 ounces out of a brown paper bag drunks highschoolers drove their tricked honda civics tinted black shades lugging chromed boots subwoofers slammed down No Limit beats while they hung out in the parking lot they think smoking black & milds are so cool 3am at Château Blanc When the bars are closed These stereotypes gather

Up the ladder: Downside
Down the ladder: Its Hard to Say

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10242
Posted: February 2, 2004 12:07 AM PST; Last modified: February 2, 2004 12:07 AM PST
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[6] zodiac @ 152.31.228.13 | 2-Feb-04/7:45 AM | Reply
I guess they're your stereotypes too. You didn't do anything to make them more. By which I mean, it's good writing, and great images, but ultimately nothing.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 2-Feb-04/8:09 AM | Reply
Whitey's ain't shit. Lefty's is where it's at. Password: KEN SENT ME.
[n/a] ho_hum @ 81.104.196.125 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 5-Feb-04/2:16 PM | Reply
Now that takes me back. Leisure Suit Larry I believe. Readers may like to take this as an indication that -=Dark_Angel=- spent his formative years trying to get a badly a drawn computer game character to cop off with another badly drawn computer game character. In this challenge he eventually succeeds with the unusual aphrodisiac of an apple. Stranger things happen at sea.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.87 > ho_hum | 5-Feb-04/2:39 PM | Reply
Leisure Suit Larry is not a game -- it's a simulation.
[6] NanceXToo @ 24.229.216.168 | 5-Feb-04/1:10 PM | Reply
I'm seconding what Zodiac said. :D
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