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3AM At Whitey's (Free verse) by DurtKL

Location : White Castles on Reading Road. Reading, OH reading folk: white trash drunks enyce wearing wigger type drunks niggaz, drinkin 40 ounces out of a brown paper bag drunks highschoolers drove their tricked honda civics tinted black shades lugging chromed boots subwoofers slammed down No Limit beats while they hung out in the parking lot they think smoking black & milds are so cool 3am at Château Blanc When the bars are closed These stereotypes gather

zodiac 2-Feb-04/7:45 AM
I guess they're your stereotypes too. You didn't do anything to make them more. By which I mean, it's good writing, and great images, but ultimately nothing.




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