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ATLAS (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton Grrr..fucking ants, people working, smoke..? WINE!
Wine, whining, no, no, know..
Dime, time, no time, Dime..
Land of the free, like me HUH?
Somber
Somber
NEVER SOBER?
Grr..fucking ants, drunk whacked out world, no-one listen.
LISTEN.
LISTEN!
An what do I care?
Up the ladder:
where i end and crysta begins
Down the ladder:
My Lie
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Posted: January 31, 2004 3:06 PM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2004 3:06 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8950 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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1-Feb-04/4:15 AM
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For one thrilling moment I thought the title of this piece was "AIDS". -10-
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