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Stronger (Free verse) by devina They think they got so much power.
The power to control my life.
But you know what?
I got the power.
I got the power to control my life.
It´s only me and destiny.
People can´t decide your life,
tell you how to be and how to act.
Think they know it all.
Think that you´re weak, and they are strong.
But you know what?
I got the power.
I got the power to control my life.
It´s only me and destiny.
I don´t care about them.
They can do whatever they want.
Cause this is my life.
I have to think about me,
what I want in my life.
And I´m not weak, I´m strong.
Stronger than they think!
Up the ladder:
Blobby blob code **
Down the ladder:
Take Off Your Mask
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Posted: January 30, 2004 10:25 AM PST; Last modified: January 30, 2004 10:25 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.462117 Overall Rank: 12885 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.87
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30-Jan-04/11:12 AM
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They'll be quaking in their boots when thay read this. Powerful stuff! -10-
Those little fuckers.
This one's too generic, too. It needs to "show" more in order to back up what you're trying to say with it and "tell" less, unless you can tell it with more originality than that.
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