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Take Off Your Mask (Lyric) by Sterling5583
Take off your mask and let me see The one with whom I want to be I want to learn of who you are My love, my light, my shooting star. How many people can say that they've known you? Can you make in your life, enough room for two? Take off your mask for me Loose your emotions free Take off your mask, shadow. Too little of you I know. Take off your mask, Malta Knight Move your spirit to the light Please do not hide from me anymore From me or your friends or some internal war Your past to me now is all behind you Your old life is gone, now please start anew. All I've seen of you is clouded in shade. When I try to come close, to the shadows you fade. Inside of yourself, you live all alone. In a torturous, dark, and desolate zone. Eternally trying to right the wrongs of man. Searching forever for a true companion. What the future shall bring we cannot see. But you know through it all, you will always have me.

Up the ladder: Stronger
Down the ladder: Losing Control

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.909091
Weighted score: 4.4545455
Overall Rank: 12886
Posted: June 6, 2002 6:53 AM PDT; Last modified: June 6, 2002 6:53 AM PDT
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