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raven hath spoken (testing....) (Free verse) by crwncka1
I now will begin my tale of the raven, as the 'inner' demonic presence well known in the poetic society of course, famously quoted 'nevermore' but I will not speak of that, as my inner raven has now fully awakened and it is rising from within the darkest depths of my soul existence as the lonely black bird of wicked evil as told by mythological legend forever now has awakened from my very core, forever staring outward with that red glare that has now made me so aware of my true nature so aware of my real inner self, as this raven I tell of has spoken this black bird has emerged from the deep blackened depths of nowhere out of the the darkest reaching shadows seen from the realm of my soul to be somewhere way down there, looking though past the ever dark void that this black bird of folklore forever called something of "evilness" now finally has emerged forth out of all the darkness felt deep within all the way from the darkest reaching shadows of my core existence from my very inner core is where the raven now is lifting away from as the wind from the west now sets you free, evermore! this black raven bird I became so aware of looking though the glass of the blackened abyss that looms so large in my mind now forever gone as the shadows from it now are lifting away under the bright sunlight that finally shines down from the deep blue heavens seen high above as this creature of mine becomes a clear lens of focus from my vision as the shadows now lift entirely away from the very depth of my soul the shadows that stretched all the way down past the dark void tunnel to the depth of the real source of it all - the true essence behind nature now seen under the eyes of god that lift away all dark shadows as this black bird has awakened in me from the very core of my being from the very blackened abyss center where nature may now seat my soul from this raven of mine as finally it may fade away in the distance no longer my view is seen in separation with god as unity is forming a layer deep within the waters of my soul with the raven seen in light that never again will allow this bird of agony to haunt my sense of self as wind from the west now sets you free, evermore! as the raven finally is fully awakened from deep within my existence this black bird of shadows now may forever become just a memory of mine that no longer may cease to cause loneliness though a fear of the dark as now seen in a true vision looking right though your very existence past the wickedness of that red glare your eyes so ominously stare is the light of symbolic wisdom that your in truth just a black bird a black bird like any other that has emerged from within flying away from the depth of my soul realm of existence with the light now casting all the way down from the heavens as I now may speak in true awareness of my sprit that has brought you forth away from the dark underworld calling on your wings to set you free from your dark myth and legend as the wind from the west is now ready for you to fully set sail on as it now begins to pick your presence up, and you are flown away away from me, as I now honestly state though a true vision of knowing found looking deep within to find the surface hiding your real nature as wind from the west now sets you free, evermore!

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.6666667
Weighted score: 4.483454
Overall Rank: 12845
Posted: January 29, 2004 1:56 AM PST; Last modified: January 29, 2004 1:56 AM PST
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[2] zodiac @ 67.240.155.82 | 29-Jan-04/4:28 AM | Reply
Dear god... You might consider changing your title to "8 Commas, a Dash, an Exclamation Mark, and 839 Words of Meaningless Rambling Drivel, Topped By a Pretentious Use of 'Hath'." Do you do this all the time?!? My favorite part is "a true vision of knowing found looking deep within to find the surface hiding your real nature" which is, after all, as good an instance as any of something being found by finding.
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