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Our world

Member since 2004 · Posted 27 Jan 2004 · 3 comments

Once i was in a tree, Looking as far as the eye could see, all i could see, was a number of bees, oh what a desolate planet.

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5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

[8] irishfolksuicide 27-Jan-04/7:44 AM Reply

there is a sound to irony, and this is not far off.

[n/a] 47Ronin › irishfolksuicide 28-Jan-04/2:46 AM Reply

I thank you for that comment and can see that you have understood what i was trying to capture.

[4] Blue Magpie 22-Jun-05/9:56 PM Reply

You mean there were no plants, rocks, soil or anything?I guess a lot depends on how good your eyesight is.