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Our world (Free verse) by 47Ronin Once i was in a tree,
Looking as far as the eye could see,
all i could see,
was a number of bees,
oh what a desolate planet.
Up the ladder:
wonder
Down the ladder:
Gracy (An ode to my greyhound)
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Posted: January 27, 2004 5:19 AM PST; Last modified: January 27, 2004 5:19 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8569565 Overall Rank: 10480 Comments:
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irishfolksuicide @ 81.178.213.66
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27-Jan-04/7:44 AM
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there is a sound to irony, and this is not far off.
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47Ronin @ 212.135.1.80
> irishfolksuicide
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28-Jan-04/2:46 AM
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I thank you for that comment and can see that you have understood what i was trying to capture.
You mean there were no plants, rocks, soil or anything?I guess a lot depends on how good your eyesight is.
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