poemranker ::dreamer by timvick473662003

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Free verse № 80026

dreamer

Member since 2003 · Posted 22 Jan 2004 · Edited 22 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

Love is but a childs lullaby Leading me into a deep trance One that fills my heart With joy and pain wholeness, and nothingness All wrapped into one emotion O God never let me awake Never let me see What is really real My own reality

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[n/a] deleted user 24-Jan-04/1:30 PM Reply
May I also pray with "What is really real my own reality?" ?