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dreamer (Free verse) by timvick473662003 Love is but a childs lullaby
Leading me into a deep trance
One that fills my heart
With joy and pain wholeness, and nothingness
All wrapped into one emotion
O God never let me awake
Never let me see
What is really real
My own reality
Up the ladder:
Pinhole
Down the ladder:
Septolet Without You
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Posted: January 22, 2004 3:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2004 3:58 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0476813 Overall Rank: 6903 Comments:
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24-Jan-04/1:30 PM
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May I also pray with "What is really real my own reality?" ?
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