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dreamer (Free verse) by timvick473662003
Love is but a childs lullaby Leading me into a deep trance One that fills my heart With joy and pain wholeness, and nothingness All wrapped into one emotion O God never let me awake Never let me see What is really real My own reality

Up the ladder: How to Bleed
Down the ladder: Drowsy

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6907
Posted: January 22, 2004 3:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2004 3:58 PM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 24-Jan-04/1:30 PM | Reply
May I also pray with "What is really real my own reality?" ?
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