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beauty (Free verse) by peaceseeker
on this day. the one day of the week
i am not a slave-laborer
my favorite day, Sunday
recalling your voice singing
loudly the lyrics profound
the passion and the skill rebounding
incredibly, my dance inspiring
excitement in your eyes
oblivious the muse is my mask
like something so beautiful
it takes on different forms
each time you look at it
the truth is, it's not an illusion
disillusions of new friendship
where you were sitting when
we met at the coffee shop
indifferent to my muse and
not avoiding my eyes now
hungover from being played
by one finger in perfect harmony
with your residual relationship
energy beneficial to the universe
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10701
Posted: January 18, 2004 10:03 AM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2004 10:03 AM PST
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