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STAB STAB STAB and then give the knife a twist (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I did something so foolish
It kills me to think back on it
I made a promise and broke it
No matter how tiny the breach was
It left a lasseration in my conscience
The whole time I looked at that other guy
Hoping he would stop
He didn't go too far
I just wanted to keep a promise I'd made
But no I couldn't keep my word
I broke my promise so early, so flawed
It's not that I couldn't stop my self
I couldn't stop him
I hate it because it wasn't you
I promised!
With every rushing wave of guilt
It's like the knife slides deeper
And twists itself inside the grey matter
Till I scream and tell you the truth
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Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5160
Posted: January 13, 2004 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2004 2:13 PM PST
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