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STAB STAB STAB and then give the knife a twist (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I did something so foolish It kills me to think back on it I made a promise and broke it No matter how tiny the breach was It left a lasseration in my conscience The whole time I looked at that other guy Hoping he would stop He didn't go too far I just wanted to keep a promise I'd made But no I couldn't keep my word I broke my promise so early, so flawed It's not that I couldn't stop my self I couldn't stop him I hate it because it wasn't you I promised! With every rushing wave of guilt It's like the knife slides deeper And twists itself inside the grey matter Till I scream and tell you the truth

Up the ladder: Storm Over Gypsy River
Down the ladder: Stripes

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5153
Posted: January 13, 2004 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2004 2:13 PM PST
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