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in you (Ode) by fevriere
in you: all cries can s m i l e away from me all seas can breathe " a sigh of relief " and please please somebody beautiful capable see me SCARE me grab- me take me escape me h o m e > in you.

Up the ladder: Mistress of Dreams
Down the ladder: Your Beautiful Silence

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8647
Posted: January 12, 2004 3:33 AM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2004 3:33 AM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.87 | 9-Feb-04/5:51 AM | Reply
Absurdly lewd. -no vote-
[n/a] fevriere @ 62.254.128.6 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 9-Feb-04/6:02 AM | Reply
Eh?
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