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What if... (Free verse) by DMonster
Darkness takes over Time is coming to an end We will all die eventually Weather it be painful, peaceful, or self-conducted We all have our own time to die I choose to make mine now With the gun in my hand One bullet its loaded I put it against my head and pull the trigger, the bullet is lodged into my head As I lay here with blood all around me I think of the people who finally got what they wanted And in these last moment I think...What if... Time is coming to an end Darkness takes over

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11915
Posted: January 9, 2004 9:48 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2004 9:48 PM PST
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[1] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 11-Jan-04/12:11 PM | Reply
A centiturd.
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