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Confuse Me (Lyric) by hatedestruction
speaking softly in foreign tongue feeling nothing but broken love drain it out of your blackened skin feel the sting of unloving sin remembrance forgotten in brain waves seasons changing under the work of slaves slowly suffocate in an open field shards floating of the broken shield winds swirling and earth disrupted water evaporating as the fire stops abruptly boredom reaches your sight of smell feathers falling off the small, quick quail fall down to the dirt and sky wondering if this is what it feels like to die

Up the ladder: Words
Down the ladder: Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3373
Posted: January 8, 2004 8:25 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2004 8:25 AM PST
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[10] nothingtoanyone @ 65.125.114.157 | 8-Jan-04/10:12 AM | Reply
wow, that's what i thought when i read this...
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