|
|
Brandon's Poem (Free verse) by LuV_jOhNnY
The doors sprung open and a chilling gale filled the hallowed halls
Dried up leaves scurried across the mosaic tile ground
A pair of beat up combat boots, one after another
Entered the hall with a light echoing thud
The boy with the well worn combat boots
Long hair
And light gray trench coat
Traipsed down the hall with a semi- cocky swagger
Which was quite refreshing
To see such confidence in such a new face
And I was left standing
Gazing down the hall
Class ended abruptly as the final bell sounded
I began to look down the hall
Longingly
Searching for the boy with the smug swagger
Soon I could feel the tense buzz that was humming rapidly through the
air
I could hear the gears of the rumor mill turning
I tuned my self into the conversations that were going on around me
The whole school seemed to be discussing the object of my fascination
As I continued down the hall towards the exit
Continually eavesdropping
I spotted him as he walked in the opposite direction
That would be the last glimpse I would get of him
That day
The weekend flew by much too fast
But I found myself thinking
As I rose from my bed
That I would
At last
Get to see him again
And see him I did
After my first class I walked down the stairs
As he was walking up them
Our eyes met
Only for a second
Before I shyly turned away
Not daring to speak
I continued on my way
The next day came
But he was not there
Nor was he the next day
By Thursday I began to wonder
Did I imagine him
Was he really real
I was no longer sure
Friday is always a wonderful day
It means freedom is so close
So close you can taste it
But this Friday was truly great
For he had returned
But still I could not bring my self to speak to him
I was too shy
Monday morning brought fresh news
The object of my secret affection had developed a fondness of his own
He was standing in the hallway by the stairs
In his beloved combat boots
A slimming black tee
Baggy Black pants
With his hair pulled away from his face in a casual low pony
His hands were shoved deep into his endless pockets
And the stick of his sucker was sticking out of his mouth at a strategic
angle
To create the illusion that he was having a smoke
I approached him with a bit more confidence
Today would be the day
Today I would talk to him
But, before I got to him, he reached out his hand
And touched another girls forearm
âDo you want to go out Fridayâ
He whispered
He had developed a crush
Who would soon become his girl
His light
His life
But it wasnât me
It will never be me
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 1 |
8 |
|
0 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 0 |
6 |
|
0 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 1 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
1 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10683
Posted: January 4, 2004 7:08 PM PST; Last modified: January 4, 2004 7:08 PM PST
View voting details
201 view(s)
|