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we can't walk forever (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
And we walk down the road
The same road we always walk down
Every time we get bored
By the inside of your apartment
The cracks in the disjointed concrete
Have sunk into my mind
I've come to know
That there is always an empty can
Of Pap's Blue Ribbon
Sitting on the crate
Around the corner
Beside the garbage can
Leaning against the
Baked-brick exterior of
Lenny's Diner
We circle past the abandoned high school
Where the drug dealers live
And pass by Lenny's
And tiptoe betwen the cracks
And walk up the steps
To your apartment
Soon enough we'll turn around
We'll walk down the road again
We might stop at Lenny's
So you can smoke
While I grab a milkshake
But eventually we will have to go back
We can't walk forever
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Posted: January 4, 2004 3:37 PM PST; Last modified: January 4, 2004 3:37 PM PST
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