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Love Me Please (Free verse) by purplestain
It’s getting colder in this dump where I lie I’m getting older and still wondering why I’m loveless and not deserving any It is not that I didn’t give it a try But no one ever gave me a chance Nobody tried to comprehend me I’m like a book waiting to be read A hungry soul waiting to be fed I’m looking for a song to sing Would someone play me the tune please? Right now I’m feeling low But I hope that doesn’t mean That love is gone and lost I wish someone would save me quick I need to get out from this ditch I want someone to hold me tight And tell me everything is alright Let me know if this is just a nightmare So I can wake up soon All I really want is to be loved


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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4290
Posted: January 1, 2004 6:01 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2004 6:01 PM PST
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[n/a] purplestain @ 202.184.17.249 | 1-Jan-04/10:10 PM | Reply
did i just deleted the comments?
[7] titan69 @ 62.31.29.33 | 2-Jan-04/12:36 PM | Reply
It must be a terrible nightare not to be loved.
Wake up know your time has come.
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