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Let's Play (Free verse) by jasondingus
Hold me tight, hold me near,
Whisper how much, you love me, in one ear,
Look me in the eyes, and you will see,
What your love, does to me,
Lift my shirt, above my head,
Let it fall, beside the bed,
Flesh on flesh, we shall be,
I need you to, ravage me,
Take the part, that you need so,
I give you, absolute control,
Don't be gentle, don't be kind,
Baby get ruff, and lets grind,
O yea that's the way,
I could go for this, everyday,
Show me pleasure, show me pain,
There's no reason, to have shame,
Right beside you, I now lay,
Inside my mouth, you can play,
Oh the games, that you know,
Inside me they, will flow!
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3162
Posted: December 30, 2003 4:21 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2003 4:21 PM PST
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It lacks a certain passion don't you think.