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Mr. Moldmakerman (Free verse) by Hillarystep
Preacherman say if I didn't follow his savior
I'd be pitched from the pearlies on m' posterior
If I didn't show up in the walls five times a week
I'd have no taste r part of blessins fer the meek
He say the Good Book aint fer understandin by me
That be his work, t'aint fer me to disagree
That's right, that's what he say
Painterman say if I can't paint inside the lines
With 'Casso and that Michaelangelo I'll never dine
See he done been trained by the finest on that ther art
On this here subject I t'aint got nuthin to impart
Tells me art sho nuf t'aint bout heart and feeling
It be about makin mirrors even if taint soul healing
That's right, that's what he say
Partisanman say if I don't vote his gangs way
Country and my chillen's chillin sho nuf gonna pay
Says to trust him to luv'em just as much as me
Admits I thinks on it, "he do got that ther degree"
Tells me he knows pockets n ideals best fer me
Just send in this here proxy, n I can set ma mind free
That's right, that's what he say
Invites Mr. Moldmakerman in fer a sit down n tea
While I listen this here 'Chaikovsky, he pretty good ya see
Tells me a joke guess meant be funny fer country folk like us
Hope no feelins hurt, 'tween you n me was kinda silly but aint no fuss
Woulda been more obliging with a ring thats all
Sunday mornin's the time for me n the lady's own lord's call
That's right, that's what I's a thinkin
Moldmakerman scratch and shake the head says okay
Say I just too much work n tried s'plainin me away
Said I wudn't up to standard with good country folk sights
Called me aberrations and waht not n thats just not right
Says I was too much work n said his goodbyes
I think he was scared when he looked thru his eyes
Said he might be back, next time wit entourage
Me thinks maybe fraid his reality was only a mirage
Misplaced by all Mr. Moldmakerman's men
That's right, that's what I think
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12213
Posted: December 28, 2003 11:51 AM PST; Last modified: December 28, 2003 12:27 PM PST
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