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Untitled (Free verse) by justjay Crossroads
Left at an intersection
It seems like desting is already chosen
I'm stuck with all I don't have
I can see what I want
Unfortunately only as it walks away.
My mind seems to be lost in turmoil
I'm digging myself out of the garbage that I just put in
All I can do is absolutely nothing
I'm careless and lost within myself
Up the ladder:
All About Me
Down the ladder:
Rock Bottom
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Posted: December 18, 2003 10:54 AM PST; Last modified: December 18, 2003 10:54 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12171 Comments:
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justjay @ 192.107.108.232
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18-Dec-03/10:55 AM
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Short and sweet. I know there is no punctuation but the poem is still be "played" with. I may even add another verse or two. but i just made this one last night and thought hey why not put it up on poemrankers so people can destroy it
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