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Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Dec 2003 · 1 comment

Crossroads Left at an intersection It seems like desting is already chosen I'm stuck with all I don't have I can see what I want Unfortunately only as it walks away. My mind seems to be lost in turmoil I'm digging myself out of the garbage that I just put in All I can do is absolutely nothing I'm careless and lost within myself

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[n/a] justjay 18-Dec-03/10:55 AM Reply

Short and sweet. I know there is no punctuation but the poem is still be "played" with. I may even add another verse or two. but i just made this one last night and thought hey why not put it up on poemrankers so people can destroy it