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Loose Change (Lyric) by Miggy
You thought my fortune would give you fame I tried to think otherwise Wanted glamour but I only got you shame And you gave me back lies The greed you owned never got you anywhere Except lonely again What I saw as justice you say is not so fair (Then again) I thought we were more than friends (Chorus) To you, I may be a penny’s worth Picking me up from the street I lie motionless but you never see me hurt Cause you aren’t loose change like me From giving you a car to that diamond ring Just wasted my priceless time Even after I got you your everything You bought me out like a crime In return I only needed someone to hold on to Never even provide me that Maybe feeling heartbroken after losing you (Then again) you treated me like a rat (Chorus) Flipping me like a coin up and down As I hope to land somehow On one side was our relationship And the other a sudden end Guess which side I had to face Stopping us with a bitter taste So happy that everyone else could see That without you I am free (Chorus) (End)

Up the ladder: My Wife
Down the ladder: forwards

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.909091
Weighted score: 6.4545455
Overall Rank: 723
Posted: December 17, 2003 12:56 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2003 12:56 PM PST
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[0] Everyone @ 162.84.137.109 | 19-Dec-03/11:30 AM | Reply
glamour :-\
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