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I Be Damned (Free verse) by PoolSh4rk
I never thought this would happen, The day when I lose all I care, And when it is all taken, How I feel it was all so rare, If I’m given the chance to put it all back, I’d definitely be stepping on the gas, If I fail, I’d pick up my sack, And run away, fast oh fast, To all of those I have done wrong, Oh how I wish, I’m forgiven, It may not be nice, may not be a song, But it may, make things even, Just one last thing for me to say: For those of you who made me fall, Hey, Fuck you all!

Up the ladder: Haiku String of the Bee
Down the ladder: Gone Wrong

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8654
Posted: December 14, 2003 8:03 AM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2003 8:03 AM PST
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