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life in general (Free verse) by timvick473662003
In life we don't focus on what we want In life we don't care who we are But the matter of it is Who are we? In life we act as others want us to be In life we cannot tell who our true friends are But the matter of is There is only one, God He is our only true friend In life we act immature in some form or another In life we are rude and cruel to whoever But do we think the stuff we do hurts others Or are you the most selfish of us all In life I say we are "fools of evil" We act stupid in every way of life But who cares it's what you believe In life I hope you know what you believe in And what you are doing When you do not know your the one who is lost And confused!!! But I don't care who you are Because it's a matter of what God wants You to believe in And what God wants you to do!!!

Up the ladder: Listless Nights
Down the ladder: Hands.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6139
Posted: December 3, 2003 5:44 PM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2003 5:44 PM PST
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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 3-Dec-03/6:30 PM | Reply
God wants you to make a lemming and sink you constipated bowl of godsoaked goat pellets.
[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 4-Dec-03/9:36 AM | Reply
What you have here is a list of poems that are waiting for you to write (God told me to tell you that - that, and "tell him to wash his Me-damned socks").

I used to do more of this "mouthpiece of God" thing, but there's no prophet in it.
[7] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 > Shuushin | 4-Dec-03/9:37 AM | Reply
Get it??? No PROPHET in it!! HAAA - OOoooh.

Thats a good one.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > Shuushin | 4-Dec-03/10:19 AM | Reply
tsk.
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