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Rewrite (Lyric) by Miggy
Another one of those same songs About whatever I did wrong But I don’t know what that was Was it my ever lacking Of simple responsibility Or my control as thin as straws (Bridge) And whatever I did then Sure enough effects me now (Chorus) I can’t rewrite that I did to you Can’t reverse what we’re going through But I want to restart what we had And I’ll never ever make you sad…again I won’t make another excuse Because if I really knew I wouldn’t have done it in the first place You leave me here with a haunt The same old thing that I forgot Has removed me from your pretty face (Bridge) (Chorus) Tell me, tell me What is it that I have to see Tell me, tell me So that we’ll be together joyfully (Chorus/End)


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Arithmetic Mean: 8.2
Weighted score: 6.6
Overall Rank: 602
Posted: December 1, 2003 11:56 AM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2003 11:56 AM PST
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