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A Good Stretch (Free verse) by kingit
In the most unfathomable fashion the Luck had
occasioned me not unlike It ever had before...
ambushing me like reptile on rodent sudden surprise! but-
I was one happy rat strange kindness, but then, all
kindness is... Power was smiling on me a momentary
parting of the clouds if only to force acknowledgement of a
sun ..& I thought I hated It! She was delicious
I bathed in her warm blood elation! alas! then as oddly
as she came... she squeezed- into a memory.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4485
Posted: November 29, 2003 11:41 AM PST; Last modified: November 29, 2003 11:41 AM PST
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This thing you do with the line spaces and break... works. A pleasant, inviting cadence.
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