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sumerian translation (Other) by vermeer33 MY BELOVED KNOWS MY HEART,
MY BELOVED IS SWEET AS HONEY,
SHE IS AS FRAGRANT TO THE NOSE AS WINE,
THE FRUIT OF MY FEELINGS
Up the ladder:
Sitting Alone
Down the ladder:
Shit-Crumpets for supper!
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Posted: November 22, 2003 6:41 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2003 6:41 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7317934 Overall Rank: 11780 Comments:
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richa @ 81.178.247.215
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23-Nov-03/9:48 AM
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Like the unusual phrasing of lines 3,4.
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