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sumerian translation (Other) by vermeer33
MY BELOVED KNOWS MY HEART, MY BELOVED IS SWEET AS HONEY, SHE IS AS FRAGRANT TO THE NOSE AS WINE, THE FRUIT OF MY FEELINGS

Down the ladder: just can't

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11782
Posted: November 22, 2003 6:41 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2003 6:41 PM PST
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[7] richa @ 81.178.247.215 | 23-Nov-03/9:48 AM | Reply
Like the unusual phrasing of lines 3,4.
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