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She was supposedly yours... as was I (Free verse) by Katzclear
Pushed out of your way as you found another amusing Never thought I'd see this day Where you I'd be losing You talked to her but a single time And decided she was more than I Decided you just wouldn't be mine All we had you would simply deny So unlike you this was Didn't think I'd see this Simply leaving because I was easy to dismiss Another swept me away Saving me from falling Though I still regretted that day And you yourself I found appalling With the friend I did stay He knows I don't love him But it was kept this way Simply friends neatly trimmed The one you found amusing Found something better to do You got a taste of your own abusing For she found one better than you You were left alone Crying in your despair To this I'd known you were prone Couldn't have been changed by a prayer You decide to get smart Come tell me you love me Proud of yourself you are you think from your problems your freed But forget it my dear I don't play games this way Once you were out of here That was where you were to stay Should have thought about it Before you left my life You won't have me, you selfish twit You've put me through enough pain and strife.


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5419
Posted: November 19, 2003 5:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 5:21 PM PST
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 19-Nov-03/5:53 PM | Reply
lol. funny poem, ah here's a correction,
"you think from your problems your freed" you are?
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > horus8 | 19-Nov-03/6:00 PM | Reply
k thanks ^.^
[9] sliver @ 63.189.49.245 | 19-Nov-03/8:30 PM | Reply
Could that possibly be horus, being NICE? no, my feeble eyes decieve me I'm sure. WHATS UP KATZ, I see he got his own.
[n/a] Katzclear @ 12.222.55.183 > sliver | 20-Nov-03/1:18 PM | Reply
Hey sliver, not much up.. how I WISH he'd get what's coming to him.. I know it will cuz I know this girly he thinks he has is just not going to work... just because of certain circumstances...
[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54 | 19-Nov-03/10:23 PM | Reply
Nothing can happen to you wich is not a manifestation of your own state of consciusness.. other wise well trimed is always the way to go, twit or teat your poem was a treat. ciao bella!
[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 23-Feb-04/5:06 PM | Reply
cute
[5] Fearlesfan_04 @ 129.66.1.202 | 24-Feb-05/6:42 PM | Reply
Love it...t
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