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She was supposedly yours... as was I (Free verse) by Katzclear
Pushed out of your way
as you found another amusing
Never thought I'd see this day
Where you I'd be losing
You talked to her but a single time
And decided she was more than I
Decided you just wouldn't be mine
All we had you would simply deny
So unlike you this was
Didn't think I'd see this
Simply leaving because
I was easy to dismiss
Another swept me away
Saving me from falling
Though I still regretted that day
And you yourself I found appalling
With the friend I did stay
He knows I don't love him
But it was kept this way
Simply friends neatly trimmed
The one you found amusing
Found something better to do
You got a taste of your own abusing
For she found one better than you
You were left alone
Crying in your despair
To this I'd known you were prone
Couldn't have been changed by a prayer
You decide to get smart
Come tell me you love me
Proud of yourself you are
you think from your problems your freed
But forget it my dear
I don't play games this way
Once you were out of here
That was where you were to stay
Should have thought about it
Before you left my life
You won't have me, you selfish twit
You've put me through enough pain and strife.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5394
Posted: November 19, 2003 5:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 5:21 PM PST
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"you think from your problems your freed" you are?