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Hurricane (Free verse) by angel_uy
Everything to be said Time ripped away, A stab to the heart Emotions are lost. Something better has come way, Impossible comprehension A blood tear trickle down, A storm come to follow. Chasing the shadows In the depths of sorrows, Change crashes through Tearing love away. Ready to give up Pain piercing deep, Dissconnected from the world. Achieving dreams, left unstable Too much lost, for whats being gained. Longing for what was had Eating away until nothings left, No one around, only a sea of black. Shivers of fear, sighs of gloom What's left of life, Means nothing to me.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11684
Posted: November 16, 2003 11:01 AM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2003 11:01 AM PST
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