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Hurricane (Free verse) by angel_uy
Everything to be said
Time ripped away,
A stab to the heart
Emotions are lost.
Something better has come way,
Impossible comprehension
A blood tear trickle down,
A storm come to follow.
Chasing the shadows
In the depths of sorrows,
Change crashes through
Tearing love away.
Ready to give up
Pain piercing deep,
Dissconnected from the world.
Achieving dreams, left unstable
Too much lost, for whats being gained.
Longing for what was had
Eating away until nothings left,
No one around, only a sea of black.
Shivers of fear, sighs of gloom
What's left of life,
Means nothing to me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11662
Posted: November 16, 2003 11:01 AM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2003 11:01 AM PST
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