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Sabre

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

a timed movement. displacement keeps you safe, steel to steel or steel to flesh mental chess reachs one hundred miles an hour tennis, by comparasion, evolves over an age of history touche. like that. no notice. if you'd seen it coming, you would have stopped it.

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[8] Bachus 3-Aug-02/11:16 PM Reply
Tennis balls should be made out of steel. More velocity!
[9] razorgrin 4-Aug-02/12:30 PM Reply
This is mighty. I used to do kedo in ages past, and this is what it feels like. genius.