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Sabre (Free verse) by tiamat a timed movement.
displacement keeps you safe,
steel to steel or steel to flesh
mental chess reachs one hundred
miles an hour
tennis, by comparasion,
evolves over an age of history
touche.
like that. no notice.
if you'd seen it coming, you would have stopped it.
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Posted: August 3, 2002 7:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2002 7:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.336177 Overall Rank: 3443 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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3-Aug-02/11:16 PM
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Tennis balls should be made out of steel. More velocity!
This is mighty. I used to do kedo in ages past, and this is what it feels like. genius.
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