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Free verse № 73412

wretched heart-wrench

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

soft and sweet and sticky, dripping. our eyes met. no need for speaking. love, death, and endless weeping. all in a moment. then no more feeling.

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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-03/1:29 AM Reply
Truly, as coherent as window shielding a moth at ninety mph. On a better note however it helped me arrive at a bowel movement.
[7] kingit 4-Nov-03/10:15 AM Reply
this is sweet.