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Person (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul
I'm only who I can be I can't be anyone else I'm only who I try to be I don't try to be anyone else The person I am is the person I want to be But the person you want Isn't who I am But the person you are is exactly the person I'm looking for I would change for you but then who would I be Would I be me portraying someone else Or would I be a completely brand new person What I do know is that the person I am now Doesn't think your love is worth going through all the trouble of becoming sommeone else

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7948
Posted: October 24, 2003 7:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2003 7:07 PM PDT
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