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lame ass shit (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation she says the way
she deals with things
is by walking away
so she walked away
and i sat here,
a quivering and pathetic mess.
because the way
i deal with things
is by begging forgiveness,
so i begged for forgiveness.
but she just hung up.
so here i sit thinking lame ass shit.
Up the ladder:
Deliberate Exclusion
Down the ladder:
Drinking and driving
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Posted: October 21, 2003 6:20 PM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2003 6:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10550 Comments:
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poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.129
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21-Oct-03/7:54 PM
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See the Bitch! poem comment of using a title as a final tag line and ultimately a young cop out for a poem that would probably work better as a lyric.
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