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A Man's Quest (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld
Misery Disaster yet faster then faster
Speed is what I need
Yet driven by my master
Calmness sipping in at night
The darkened shadows never gave me a fright
Taking things into a new perspective
Man I hope these phrases won't be interjected
Lonliness with me when I'm alone
I've never had a smile, Infact I'll groan
Succesing when I meant to fail
Trusting me, when all I hear is betrayal
Looking to be found, when I'm lost
No one would tell me, hom much life would cost
Sponging around, trying to fit in
I know I've failed,
But I try alas
To get with a young,
Ladie such as a lass
Yet again it has begun,
I search for the right girl
yeah the right one
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7954
Posted: October 19, 2003 10:55 PM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2003 10:55 PM PDT
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