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A Man's Quest (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld
Misery Disaster yet faster then faster Speed is what I need Yet driven by my master Calmness sipping in at night The darkened shadows never gave me a fright Taking things into a new perspective Man I hope these phrases won't be interjected Lonliness with me when I'm alone I've never had a smile, Infact I'll groan Succesing when I meant to fail Trusting me, when all I hear is betrayal Looking to be found, when I'm lost No one would tell me, hom much life would cost Sponging around, trying to fit in I know I've failed, But I try alas To get with a young, Ladie such as a lass Yet again it has begun, I search for the right girl yeah the right one

Down the ladder: You are my very Heart

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7954
Posted: October 19, 2003 10:55 PM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2003 10:55 PM PDT
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[5] kingit @ 67.68.49.50 | 19-Oct-03/11:50 PM | Reply
sucksexing!
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