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Next Time Around (Lyric) by hotwire
Bily Foster The First time around I was too young to know So after it ended I took time to grow Love and relationship Can be confusing Sometimes you don't know What it is your losing Next time around Will be better than last Cause next time around I won't go so fast The second time around I thought I'd try harder Giving what he wants Without a big bother But still it ended And then there was me I thought I'd have something Even after he'd leave Now here in my house It's so empty and bear I was so lost I did nothing but stare Next time around Will be better than last Cause next time around I won't go so fast I'll keep on trying And moving along Because I know inside That I am strong

Up the ladder: Nitemareweaver
Down the ladder: My Love Letter

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4285715
Weighted score: 4.3084364
Overall Rank: 13127
Posted: September 25, 2003 9:18 AM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 9:18 AM PDT
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