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Nostalgia of Safe Days (Free verse) by Hostileintent
If only these walls could speak
And tell us of every week
What would they say
About every day
About every day they see
If we had the time to hear
About year, after year, after year
Would they tell us about the whispers
Those secretive whispers
They hear
After all, those walls hold memories
Nostalgic memories of times
When men were boys
And friends were fun
And lives still had miles to run
But now we leave, these walls alone
Alone to hold out thoughts, alone
Of a time of growth, of learning
Of security and a home
Of battles fought, and notes sent home
For thóse were the best times, of our lives
For we had safety from the lies
Even when they punnished you
We áll need one or two
They were truly the times for lives
I will miss those horrid days
Those long hours, those rotten pages
Some of us got those pages
And teared...And teared...And teared
I will miss those secure days
For truly I am scared
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Posted: September 25, 2003 6:27 AM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 6:27 AM PDT
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