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Free verse № 66797

An End to the Beginning

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Sep 2003 · 1 comment

I was foolish to think you would love me, always and forever. I guess this is how we learn. This is how I learn. Close your eyes, think again. Did you really mean everything? Everything that you said? I want to believe in something, you most of all. But talk is cheap and actions speak louder than words. This time I heard you. Loud and clear. I'll leave you alone now, I'll cease to care. Don't worry about me, not that you really ever did. Life moves on, as I've learned. I'll find someone new to hurt me. Again.

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[8] sliver 24-Sep-03/10:47 PM Reply
You are still so young. Don't stress it. If it's not right, don't worry about it. Move on and don't look back.Life's too short to deal with assholes. Are you cute by the way? I'm a poet you know. Read some of mine. Tell me what you think. just click my name.