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inner cave (Free verse) by crwncka1
inside the cave dwellings,
where bats are heard,
tussling around in the darkness,
down under inside the earth,
where waterfalls calm the silence around,
a place where beautiful crystals form,
in the places where the earth leaks,
colors from magenta to lavender are seen,
fostering around the trail,
ever changing the landscape,
a place forever untouched,
by the hand of man,
a realm of the old,
that came into my mind,
as a place to hopelessly drift away,
to find the renewal I need,
in my life today,
to continue my search,
for something of meaning,
as nothing now seems of hope,
on the surface that my eyes may see
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10865
Posted: September 17, 2003 7:33 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 7:33 PM PDT
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