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inner cave (Free verse) by crwncka1
inside the cave dwellings, where bats are heard, tussling around in the darkness, down under inside the earth, where waterfalls calm the silence around, a place where beautiful crystals form, in the places where the earth leaks, colors from magenta to lavender are seen, fostering around the trail, ever changing the landscape, a place forever untouched, by the hand of man, a realm of the old, that came into my mind, as a place to hopelessly drift away, to find the renewal I need, in my life today, to continue my search, for something of meaning, as nothing now seems of hope, on the surface that my eyes may see

Up the ladder: hells kitchen
Down the ladder: nentwined gets nasty

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10865
Posted: September 17, 2003 7:33 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 7:33 PM PDT
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