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alan in vonder land (Free verse) by baphomet
A mystical place like a dream.
Some the natives arenât to keen.
Like an Alice in wonderland theme.
I hope there is no evil Queen.
Creatures and giant flowers all around.
On my stroll on trail I tore my cloak.
Took a nap under tree, and sound.
The next morning I woke up soaked.
I met a white rabbit on the run.
Sitting down I watched some dancing flowers.
I drank tea mad hatter, in the end it was quiet fun.
Walking farther down the trail I seen a giant tower.
I must have been tired dead.
When I woke I was on my head.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10540
Posted: September 13, 2003 3:44 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2003 3:44 AM PDT
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